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Loom [Alternative Explicit Version]

Title: Loom (Alternative Explicit Version)
Author: stripesco04_nur 
Rating:
NC-17
Pairing:
Guy-Manuel/Thomas
Summary:
Thomas is jealous of Guy’s interaction with the actor Dan…
Disclaimer:
I do not own Guy-Manuel, Thomas, or Dan!
A/N:
Alternative to Loom. Very explicit!


Thomas stared coldly underneath his mask at the hand curled around his band-mate's own hand. His hands clenched into tight fists as his eyesight caught the faint casual stroking of a thumb across the top of Guy-Manuel's gloved hand, and he felt his lip curl back to form a snarl as Guy didn't seem to mind.

"The music was perfect! You guys truly knew what you were doing," The actor Dan, was that his name? Well, the what-ever his name was, that played Rinzler in Tron: Legacy, boasted.
Thomas shook his head slightly, glaring at the actor still in costume from the premiere - he looked nothing more than a hardcore Daft Punk wannabe, which in any other case would have Thomas beaming in admiration. But not when they tried to steal his lover away.

"It was nothing," Thomas blinked, and raised his masked face up to glance at his band-mate; Guy's English had become a little bit better. "Thomas knew what he wanted, and I just created a few samples for him to work with."

Thomas smiled underneath his mask, remembering Guy's face lighting up when he offered a quick sixty-second sampler of what would become the steady beat in the song Derezzed.

"You shouldn't give all credit to him," Dan muttered, lifting his own gloved hand and resting it against Guy's own mask - as if stroking his cheek in sympathy.

Fists crackling from the increased pressure of still tightening them in rage, Thomas barely recognized the fact that he had moved from the door of the hotel out onto the patio... 

 
"I don-" Guy began, but was interrupted by Dan's loud "Oomph!" as his hand was pulled away from Guy-Manuel's mask, and he skidded into the concrete wall of the balcony.

"Thomas!" Guy shouted, glaring underneath his own mask before rushing to check on Dan. A firm hand clamped down upon his wrist, and Guy was pulled back roughly.
He sprawled against Thomas's chest, and he fought against the pair of arms wrapping around his waist, holding him tight.

Thomas ignored the angry protests, both in French and English, and leaned his head down to rest on Guy-Manuel's shoulder. His mask bumped once and again against Guy's, but his expressionless face was solely focused on Dan, who was rubbing at his shoulder and giving the duo an intense staring.
Guy hung his head down in shame, knowing it was futile to keep resisting.

"You should go, Dan," Guy whispered out-loud.

The actor inclined his head towards the musician, and look like he was about to step closer when Thomas lifted his head from Guy's shoulder and stood up straighter. His fingers flinched now and again against his band-mate's waist, and Dan merely nodded his head before trudging away.

As soon as he was out of sight, and ear-shot, Guy struggled against Thomas's vice-like grip. Thomas gladly let go and Guy stumbled a bit before turning back to him.
"Every single time!" He started, moving past Thomas and heading back into the hotel. Thomas followed. They stood in complete silence, waiting for the elevator to arrive.

"He was flirting with you," Thomas mumbled, as the elevator doors opened and the duo walked in. Pressing for the seventh floor Guy-Manuel huffed underneath his mask.

"So what if he was?"

Thomas rushed forward and pushed Guy against the wall of the elevator; trapping the shorter male against his lean form. "Perhaps I should enlighten you about why he shouldn't be flirting with you," He whispered, nudging upwards a bit.
Guy blushed underneath his mask, and couldn't help letting out a tiny moan.

"Maybe," He taunted, resting a hand on Thomas' chest and moving it slowly, giggling as he felt a nipple grow hard underneath his hand.
Thomas pressed his pelvis closer to Guy's, slamming his hands against the side of Guy's head. The shorter male didn't seem to flinch, and continued rubbing circles on the other's chest.
A ding sounded, and both jumped back in alarm as the elevator doors opened to the seventh floor.

"Remove your mask," Thomas demanded, once their hotel door was firmly closed. Guy-Manuel tilted his head at his band-mate, and Thomas mumbled, "I do not wish to damage either of our masks."
Guy chuckled but quickly removed his mask, setting it down on an empty spot of the dresser. Thomas's mask followed suit, and sat against Guy's gold one.

The duo stared at one another - taking in the other one's human form. Of course they had seen each other without their masks, but it still was a pleasant surprise.
Thomas walked closer to Guy and reached a hand out to him. Guy blushed as Thomas cupped the back of his head and pulled his head towards his own for a kiss.
Guy wobbled a bit as the kiss deepened and Thomas merely tugged at the longish curls of hair, causing Guy to lean his head back moaning loudly.

"F-fuck, Thomas!" Guy cursed, the fingers tightening in his hair and pulling his head down so his throat was more exposed.
Thomas gave a half smile as he moved his lips away from Guy's mouth, and began sucking at the sensitive skin of Guy's throat.
Pulling his hands out of Guy-Manuel's hair, Thomas began fumbling with the zipper of Guy's leather jacket.

"God-damn-it!" He cursed, pulling restlessly at the zipper.

Guy shook his head in amusement, and cupped Thomas's hand; pulling it down. The zipper went down smoothly and Thomas blinked at his friend.

"Dumb-ass," Guy muttered as he tossed his jacket on the floor and began removing Thomas's.

"I'm not the one that resembles a donkey..."

"Fuck you!"

"I plan to."

Twin pairs of leather pants and black T-shirts littered the hotel floor, and Guy mumbled against the rush of Thomas's lips pressing harder against his own.
Falling back onto the bed, Thomas quickly wrapped his arms around his band-mate.

"I'm not gonna go anywhere," Guy protested.

"I'm not convinced," Thomas said bitterly, pulling Guy more into him. "You might go after Dan, again."

"Christ, Thomas!" Guy exclaimed, rubbing his hand along Thomas's arm. "He's just a good friend, not a lover."

"He touched your cheek."

"I had my mask on!"

"That's no excuse! He clearly wants you. But he can't have you because you are mine!" Thomas shouted, pressing his crotch against Guy's ass.
A half moan spilled out of Guy's mouth, and Thomas smiled at the reaction.

"You know you're mine," He said even softer, burying his face in the back of Guy's neck. The hair tickled his nose and he sniffed at the strong smell of shampoo.

"Quit sniffing me!"

Thomas smiled, pulling his face and body away. Guy whined in disappointment and Thomas quickly strode from the bed. He moved to his luggage bag, and fumbled with one of the side pockets.
Returning to the bed, Guy rolled his eyes as he spotted the tube of lube cradled in Thomas's hand.
Thomas saw the eyes rolling and he said sharply, "Be thankful. I was originally gonna spit-fuck you because you were flirting with that actor."

"You mean Dan?"

That caused Thomas to jump onto the bed and pin Guy-Manuel down underneath him. He pressed his straining erection, poking out against his underwear, against the curve of Guy's boxer covered ass.

"Tu es à moi!"

"Prove it," Guy teased back, lifting his ass up against Thomas's crotch.

Thomas gritted his teeth, and pressed even tighter to Guy's back. His leaned his face down against the back of Guy's shoulder and bit at the neck junction.
Guy-Manuel jerked underneath him, and Thomas ran his tongue over the bleeding wound.

Grinding his erection back against Guy again, Thomas found himself moaning as Guy mumbled against the hotel pillows, "Hurry up and fuck me!"
Thomas grinned as he placed his hands on the waistband of Guy's boxers. "Thought you'd never ask..."

"Maybe I should go with Dan, I mean if you take this long," Guy couldn't help teasing his lover.

Thomas growled and in a rush ripped both their under-garments off and onto the floor. Guy smiled against the pillows as he felt a pair of strong hands grip his ass and pull, opening him up a bit.
Thomas fumbled with the cap of lube, but managed to successfully open it, and squirting some of the content into the palm of his hand. Slick with the lotion, he applied it to his dick, moaning out loud at the sensation of touching his weeping cock.

"Hey!" Guy whined once more, raising his ass up to Thomas.

Thomas smiled and placed the tip of his cock against Guy-Manuel's ass. Slowly he pushed in, deliberately stopping so Guy's body could adjust, especially since he hadn't been stretched prior to the fucking.

"Mmmmm," Guy mumbled, his hair falling over his face and into his mouth. "I'm fine, so fuck me hard!"

Thomas edged more into his lover's body until he was completely sheathed inside. And once he was he stilled his twitching hips, and ran his hands over Guy's back and over the hands gripping the sheets.
Cupping the gripping hands, Thomas pressed Guy's wrists against the mattress. His hips began moving of their own accord, and Guy moaned out loud as Thomas began kissing from the back of his neck downward.

He fitted his hand into Guy-Manuel's hair again and tugged hard. Guy's head leaned back hard against Thomas's shoulder and his body changed into a squatting position.
Thomas anchored his arm around Guy's waist, and used his other hand to grab a hold of Guy's own leaking cock.

Guy jerked against him and his hips began matching that of Thomas's thrusts, which were becoming a little more erratic.

"Oh... Fuck! Thomas!" White mixture splattered half on Thomas's hand and Guy's own chest. Guy moaned as felt Thomas still thrusting, and he leaned his head against his lover's shoulder.
Placing his hands around Thomas's head, Guy brought his face down for a sweet kiss as Thomas felt Guy's inner muscles tense before tightening over his shaft.

Thomas cried out as his release coated the inside of Guy's ass, and the shorter male kissed the cries away.

They lay in the afterglow, neither complaining when their limbs began to grow numb, until Thomas pushed himself up and out, and Guy groaned at the movement.
Thomas left and Guy whimpered until Thomas returned with a wet hotel washcloth, and began cleaning the dried come off his chest.
"You don't have to," Guy mumbled drowsily.

"You know what happens if it dries," Thomas replied, spreading Guy's ass cheeks again and pressing the hot washcloth against his crack, cleaning him out.

Guy moaned against the sensation, and Thomas carelessly tossed the washcloth to the floor when he was finished cleaning Guy's ass.
Settling against his side, Thomas quickly maneuvered a half-asleep Guy-Manuel underneath the covers, and spooned his body around him.
Guy gave a sigh of contentment as he felt Thomas curled around him, and he burrowed his face against the pillows, but not before uttering one word; "Yours."

Please leave anything!


Comments

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stripesco04_nur
Dec. 15th, 2010 11:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
7bo7benn7
Dec. 14th, 2010 08:49 am (UTC)
Very Happy with it!

stripesco04_nur
Dec. 15th, 2010 11:55 pm (UTC)
Lol! Thank you!
ravenrobintt
Dec. 15th, 2010 01:29 am (UTC)
"Thomas rushed forward and pushed Guy against the wall of the elevator; trapping the shorter male against his lean form. "Perhaps I should enlighten you about why he shouldn't be flirting with you," He whispered, nudging upwards a bit."

Omg. Omgomg.

This story is too amazing! ^_^

stripesco04_nur
Dec. 15th, 2010 11:55 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Thanks!
sugarbunnny
Jan. 5th, 2011 03:05 am (UTC)
unnnnf. yes, that part *_________*
hanahara
Dec. 24th, 2010 02:02 am (UTC)
HNNNNNNNG.

I am so happy.

To read this.

<3
stripesco04_nur
Jan. 7th, 2011 12:13 am (UTC)
:D
sugarbunnny
Jan. 5th, 2011 03:06 am (UTC)
hnnnnnnnng.
stripesco04_nur
Jan. 7th, 2011 12:13 am (UTC)
I'll take that as a good thing!
daftame12
Jan. 5th, 2011 07:20 pm (UTC)
Awesome! ^^
stripesco04_nur
Jan. 7th, 2011 12:28 am (UTC)
Thanks!
hmwrk
Feb. 19th, 2011 05:51 am (UTC)
Definitely one of my favorites :) I really love how you wrote out Thomas' emotions, particularly the territorialness. The dialogue is great as well.
d1g1_10v3
Apr. 26th, 2011 03:41 am (UTC)
lol so the actor who played rinsler is called anis cheurfa. dan is the old guy who played as a security guard at encom. :D thought u should know
stripesco04_nur
Apr. 26th, 2011 03:53 am (UTC)
Yes I know... but I wrote this back before the actually movie came out and I couldn't find any references to who played Rinzler - somebody mention the name Dan, so yeah... :|
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