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Right Before You

Title: Right Before You
Author: stripesco04_nur 
A lazy day of smoking turns into something more…
Thomas & Guy-Manuel are not mine… yet… This is fake!
Felt like some nice smut between these two…


The cold hard ground dug into Thomas's lower back, as he lay against the floor. Wires ran crisscrossed all over the place, and distant voices could be heard.
Multicolor lights flashed and whirled, and the steady thrums of a beat beckoned him upwards, halfway at least.

Another, warm, body was plastered on top of him. And Thomas could only smile shyly as Guy-Manuel hovered over top of him - a cigarette held tightly in his right hand.
The older boy's eyes seemed to be filled with the thick smog that was slowly filling the room and Thomas moaned a bit as Guy shifted, causing their crotches to rub against one another.

Guy pulled the cigarette towards his mouth and sucked it heartily. His eyes closed as he inhaled the smoke and when he finished taking a puff he opened his eyes and peered down at the younger boy beneath him.
Thomas stared up at wonder as Guy's face edged closer to his, and his eyes slide close as Guy's lips touched his briefly.
Opening his mouth, Thomas choked a bit as smoke filtered in. Leaning his head back down against the floor, eyelids fluttering close, Thomas exhaled the smoke, smiling a bit as he watch it hit Guy's face.

Guy smiled back, and Thomas sat up, slightly throwing Guy off his lap as he lunged for the cigarette in his hand. Pulling the stick up, Thomas took a long drawl before exhaling and passing it to Guy.

"Jolie," Thomas whispered, reaching out with his hand to stroke Guy's hair.

Guy turned to him, astonishment - and a blush, filling his face as he regarded his young friend.

Thomas smiled even more as he brought his face closer, and leant his nose against the side of Guy's neck. His eyes burned a little bit, and Thomas closed them a bit as pressed his face against Guy's neck.

The older boy mumbled something in French, and took another long drag from his cigarette before smashing it against the cement floor.
The orange ambers of the butt cooled and turned dark as Thomas muttered, "Voulez-vous."

Once again, Guy-Manuel was struck speechless, and he gave a look of bewilderment to Thomas - who had struggled to his feet.
His head throbbed and Thomas leaned his head against the wall, trying to collect his thoughts but failing as he took in the sight of Guy rising to his feet as well...

Guy mumbled, his hands blindly grabbing the back of Thomas's shirt as the younger boy had slammed him into the opposite wall - hips pressed into one another, and tongues dabbling with the other.
A shocked moan spilled from Guy's mouth as Thomas's teeth bit down on the curve of his collarbone, and a mischievous hand cupped his cock.

Blood spilled from the contusion mark, and Guy whimpered as Thomas lightly licked at the wound before trailing his lips upward and bringing their lips together again.
The hand cupping and rubbing his cock slowly began to unbuckle his belt and Guy sagged a bit against the wall as Thomas grabbed his shaft - squeezing and making an obvious erection appear.

"F-fuck!" Guy stuttered against the onslaught of Thomas's lips. Guy felt pleasure gathering and it made his head hurt. Leaning his head against the wall, Guy muttered, "Je suis proche..."

Thomas quickly removed his hand, and took to thrusting his hips against the older boy's.

"Not yet..." Broken English sounded out, confusing Guy as Thomas drew his face against his neck again.

"Pourquoi ne pas?"

"N-need to fuck you, Guy!" 

Guy was appalled, and lifted Thomas's head from his shoulder. The two stared at one another before a loud sigh left Guy, and the older boy slowly sank to his knees.
He gave Thomas a shy smile before launching forward and unbuckling the younger boy's belt, and pulling the jeans and boxers down to pool around Thomas's ankles.

The air in the room made his member tingle, and Thomas's body jolted as Guy quickly took the flesh in his mouth - sucking it like he would a cigarette.
"Fuck, Guy!" Thomas panted, a tongue swiping against the underside of his cock before deep-throating the flesh once more. The younger boy's arms flailed along the wall before he reached forward to grip Guy's hair.
He ran his fingers through the older boy's hair, tugging a bit as another jolt passed through him, and smiling as a moan left Guy when he felt his hair being tugged.

Slowly, Guy let Thomas's cock slide out of his mouth, and Thomas leaned forward to swipe the extra saliva from the corner of his mouth.

Smiling, Guy turned around and pressed his hands against the wall - his ass, still clothed, tilted upwards for Thomas.
The younger boy smiled as well, and quickly pulled the older boy's pants and boxers down before angling his lube-spit cock up against the crack of Guy's ass.

Thomas grinned as his arms circled around Guy-Manuel's waist - holding him, as his cock began to burying its way inside the other man.
Tears prickled at the corner of his eyes, and Guy's fingers clenched and trembled against the wall.
Thomas noticed the trembling, and moved his hand up to cup the older boy's hand.

"Shhh..." He hushed, leaning his body against the other and slowly letting his hips thrust upward.
A broken sound, between a moan and a sob, flew out from Guy, and the younger boy's hands rubbed up and down the elder’s body.

"Je t'aime, Guy," Thomas whispered, still thrusting and pinning his body against Guy's, trapping the older boy against the wall.

"Je t'aime trop, Thomas."

Eyes closed, his rhythm picking up rapidly, Thomas groaned loudly as he came inside Guy. As he laid his head against Guy's back the younger realized he hadn't gotten Guy off as well.
Moving his hand from Guy's waist towards his cock, Guy mumbled, "Pas la peine..."

Thomas's hand stopped, and Guy said in broken English, "Already came. Right before you..."

Please leave anything!


( 8 comments — Leave a comment )
Feb. 28th, 2011 06:26 am (UTC)
I love it :) There seemed to be a sense of pain for both of them that made it more emotional. Great job!
Mar. 1st, 2011 02:28 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Mar. 1st, 2011 12:56 am (UTC)

Please never, ever stop writing Daft fics. This story made my day. <3
Mar. 1st, 2011 02:29 am (UTC)
I'll try, lol! :D
Mar. 1st, 2011 02:17 am (UTC)
Me haces muy feliz escribiendo esto ^^! ;)
Mar. 1st, 2011 02:30 am (UTC)
Gracias! :)
Apr. 26th, 2011 02:27 am (UTC)
hoorayyyy i love your style of writing!
Apr. 26th, 2011 03:55 am (UTC)
Thank you!
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